Folk tale is a story that was happened long time ago ,and it was generation to generation. Thus Beutiful Girl and Seven Little People is a wonderful folk tale story. It was happened in a small town . There was a poor woman and very beutiful girl lived in a village ,and her name was Bach Tuyet. And there was a cruel, urgly witch was living in the town. The witch wanted to be a most beautiful person in the planet,but she noticed that Bach Tuyet was much more beutiful than her ,so she did not felt happy every day. She was jealous with Bach Tuyet' s beauty ,so she tried to kill Bach Tuyet many times , but she was never successful because Bach Tuyet has always had the helps of seven little people.
There are many interesting things in this story, and you do not feel bored during you read. Besides, it gives you to learn that we should be a kind , moral people, and you will be helped from others.
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ReplyDeleteIt is like a story review.
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It is fine.
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Should write "There were a poor woman and ..." instead of "There was ......".
Hi mimimoon,
ReplyDeleteYou should translate Bach Tuyet into Snow White for easy to understand.
And the correct owrd is BEAUTIFUL